Looks great so far, your pencil line is very clean and while depicting the original scene you didn't went too far or nasty. I second the comment about her chest.
HOLY SH*T. That's looking awesome man. I've followed your stuff for some time and only seen your women modeling but this is looking great. Mmm mmm mmm ... i wish i had more hands! That way i could give this four thumbs up!!!
With best wishes,
David